Lobby,an
entrance hall, corridor,and it is completed with tables and chairs has
two function for students in FKIP UNSRI. First of all,lobby as a public
building makes us easier to find information,because there is wall
magazine that contains news. Therefore,many
students come to lobby to check the newest news. Second,lobby as a
waiting room. For examples,when your lecturer hasn't come yet,or you
wait for your friend,you may sit in the lobby. In conclusion,lobby not
only for public building but also for waiting room.
Well,I would like to assess my own paragraph and FKIP's facility as the topic. Actually,the title of my paragraph is lobby,because all of the content here is telling about lobby,so I think it is a good choice to make lobby as the title. But unfortunately, I didn't put it on that paragraph,so it means the title of my paragraph is incorrect. Next,for the topic sentence"an entrance hall,corridor,and it is completed with tables and chairs" . I put it in the beginning of the paragraph,because it is generally composed of two parts:the topic itself and the controlling idea. "Has two function for FKIP's students" is the controlling idea,because it helps the reader understand the purpose of my writing. Afterthat, my paragraph have concluding sentence which is begin with appropriate end of paragraph signal. It also mentions the things in controlling idea,such as"lobby not only for public building but also for waiting room". After I checked my paragraph carefully,there isn't unclear sentences,because the words of this paragraph literaly simple,it's only focus for one thing(lobby)and I have already given the detail information to make the reader easier to understand what the paragraph is telling about. Then,I think my paragrapah is coherence and have good unity which is consist of topic sentence,supporting sentences,and concluding sentences. The last, is the grammatical errors. I think there is no grammatical errors in my paragraph. But I am not sure whether it is correct or not. If my lecturers have already checked it and there's unclear sentences and grammatical errors,it because I am not good enough in grammar and I have tried the best for my writing. So,for my beloved lecturers,please correcting my grammatical errors. Thankyou.
Well,I would like to assess my own paragraph and FKIP's facility as the topic. Actually,the title of my paragraph is lobby,because all of the content here is telling about lobby,so I think it is a good choice to make lobby as the title. But unfortunately, I didn't put it on that paragraph,so it means the title of my paragraph is incorrect. Next,for the topic sentence"an entrance hall,corridor,and it is completed with tables and chairs" . I put it in the beginning of the paragraph,because it is generally composed of two parts:the topic itself and the controlling idea. "Has two function for FKIP's students" is the controlling idea,because it helps the reader understand the purpose of my writing. Afterthat, my paragraph have concluding sentence which is begin with appropriate end of paragraph signal. It also mentions the things in controlling idea,such as"lobby not only for public building but also for waiting room". After I checked my paragraph carefully,there isn't unclear sentences,because the words of this paragraph literaly simple,it's only focus for one thing(lobby)and I have already given the detail information to make the reader easier to understand what the paragraph is telling about. Then,I think my paragrapah is coherence and have good unity which is consist of topic sentence,supporting sentences,and concluding sentences. The last, is the grammatical errors. I think there is no grammatical errors in my paragraph. But I am not sure whether it is correct or not. If my lecturers have already checked it and there's unclear sentences and grammatical errors,it because I am not good enough in grammar and I have tried the best for my writing. So,for my beloved lecturers,please correcting my grammatical errors. Thankyou.
BalasHapus